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Xao Shen By Marlyne Enid xXxMantrumxXx... by xXxMantrumxXx Xao Shen By Marlyne Enid xXxMantrumxXx... by xXxMantrumxXx
this my Brother Personal CHaracter  that i made for him i was have him on my stash so let give him  a welcome to the world
hi is from a new story that we are creating =D

Name: Xao Shen
Age's: ???
Zodiac Sign: ???
Thing that he like: ...Kill
Thing that he hate: ??? ...!
My Story: a long one that no one want to hear at this moment  

so this is Xao Shen
he lost his memories along ago 
he dont know how many years he have
dont know his real family
he just have one memory at his mind...

sooo give him a great welcome coz he is to dangerous ^ ^ one 
i modify his armor a lil but still same

Art made by :iconxxxmantrumxxx:
Marlyne Enid (c)

Design by :iconcrystalnix:
David J.

Some Comish of him

Critique by AsetWesir AsetWesir/critique/822774612">Jul 10, 2013, 11:24:24 AM
Hi! xxxmantrumxxx,

I'm here to deliver the critique you requested.

Let us begin, I would like to start saying that this is a interesting piece of art. And I can tell you are really good at drawing this type of art. For the coloring, that the black and white colors in contrast with the red of the eye brings up the personality of the character, good. I can see the details of the armor are good.
The only thing I can't distinguish very good is the black thing in front of the character, It will be good if you could give more definition to the object. That's one of the tricky parts of using just black and white, that sometimes there are going to be objects that will lose their definition if you don't find a good way to expose them.

In conclusion, this is a really good drawing, just one or two things to improve, but besides that is very good.

With our best intentions,

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Hykerl Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
me gusta porque tiene heterocromía ^^
KishoHearts Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love it Mantrum!!! He is a wonderful looking character:) Great job dear^ /)_(\^
E-raserhead Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awesome drawing! I really love this style. The thick lines look really good!
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